“Hello everypony, Snogwritts here!”
“I recently just finished reading, “Sisters Forever” by RuinQueenofOblivion and I do
have a lot of thoughts about this fic.”
“So, without further a do, let’s get right to it.”
“Okay so let’s start with the main characters, Chicken!- I mean Scootaloo.”
“The fic starts off with Scootaloo heading home.
The young filly was riding her scooter, until she ran into Rainbow Dash.
She notices that Rainbow had been acting weird lately, and it seems that she wants find out
why.”
“I always thought Scootaloo was a species of chicken, well…
My mom didn’t think so.”
“Mom, back from sweet apple acres, our chicken is here!”
“Whoa, that’s a weird looking chicken.”
“I think we got ripped off.”
“Although, I’d have to say, this fic really captures Scootaloo’s personality.
This filly in the show would usually do things without thinking, just like the scootaloo
in this fic as well, so, regards to the author for that.”
“Although, the story itself didn’t really develop its sad setting.
What I mean is it didn’t really bring some tone into the story to make the reader feel
sad, it just felt like a drop to the bucket compared to some other writing.”
“In fact, this could benefit with more descriptive words to bring some depth into the feelings
of this story, especially for a genre like this one.”
“When it comes to sad stories, a good plotline is essential to a great story.
I find the plotline to be pretty decent, the story itself does follow a good storyline.”
“And, that’s it.
There’s not much to this story, I felt like the author could’ve added a lot more to
this story.”
“Overall, this story was decent, I liked reading it myself, but it wasn’t great.”
“So, I’m going to give this fanfic, 2 quills out of 5.”
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Alright, that’s it for me, this is Snogwritts, signing out.”
Thanks for watching!