This is something that's been on my mind for some time but I never got the chance to finish it until now. Hope you enjoy :) Artwork is by MysticAlpha and the original song is My Immortal from Evanescence

The story is that Chrissy's mother tells her that she needs to be the Queen of the hive but Chrissy wants something more so she slips away for a day and befriends a pony. At the end of the song Chrissy realizes that she can never be truly happy and be accepted.


“Give Up”
Written by: AshleyH

I’m so tired of being here
Suppressed in all my childhood fears
Oh if I could leave
Then I would just leave
But everytime I think
She pulls me out of my peace

This is who you are
Chrissy just hide your scars
You will never be like them
Even if you try

Cause you are something that they all hate
We feed on the love they create
The nightmare monsters that they fear
So give up
your dreams

One day I slipped away
From her warnings and
life that she choose
I transformed, and befriended a pony
Her voice chased away
All the sanity in me

She was not afraid
We played the night away
And I thought maybe I had a chance

That I could be more than something that they hate
I may feed on the love that they create
But here right now, my heart is full
and I know
I can try

When I showed her my true form
She was gone
That heartbreaking look that proved
I was a monster all along

Cause I am something that they hate
I feed on the love that they create
The nightmare monster that they fear
So I’ll give up
my dreams

Dreams